Well I suppose you could call it feedback - but hacking nineteen pages out of a script and then sending it back - feels more like amputation...
Hmm. But it has sparked some intriguing solutions - so here I am - back at the drawing board. But after this, it's finished and going off no matter what...
Update: have now decided to await feedback from long-standing 'friend-in-scripts' (whose feedback is always spot on.) Have to follow your instincts sometimes - and mine was telling me to put those pages back in!
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Nice one FA! If that's your instinct, you're probably right...
Indeed Elinor, I read through everything in detail, compared both versions and decided about 3 or 4 small things were 'improvements' - the rest was debatable. So then decided to seek an opinion I trust...
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